人的记忆力会随着岁月的流逝而衰退，写作可以弥补记忆的不足，将曾经的人生经历和感悟记录下来，也便于保存一份美好的回忆。写范文的时候需要注意什么呢？有哪些格式需要注意呢？以下是我为大家搜集的优质范文，仅供参考，一起来看看吧
托福写作满分评分标准篇一
do you agree or disagree with the following statement？ games are as important for adults as they are for children. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
同意这个观点比较容易写。
成年人也有娱乐的需求，从繁重的压力中解脱出来（escape）
游戏对老年人更是如此。
从游戏中可以学到很多东西（桥牌——团队精神；围棋、象棋——拓展智力）
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『范文』
games are fun. this is true for adults and children alike. however， games also teach a variety of skills and they further every domain of a person＇s development. this is particularly important during the early stages of life. through games children learn gross motor and fine motor skills， they practice and develop the ability to use language， and they learn important interpersonal and social skills. adults can use games to strengthen these areas， but their abilities are already much more advanced， and therefore games are more important for children.
in play a child learns gross motor skills such as walking or jumping， which an adult has already mastered. pushing a shopping cart， for example， teaches a toddler to balance his/her weight and to use his/her legs to support his/her body. this activity is game and exercise at the same time， but it would be completely unnecessary
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托福写作满分评分标准篇二
do you agree or disagree with the following statement? most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. use reasons and specificexamples to support our answer.
作文范文：
some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time, can laterbecome valuable experiences. i cannot agree with them more. there are numerous reasons why ihold confidence on this opinion, and i would explore only a few primary ones here.
difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. in the course of our life, we are going to facenumerous difficulties and obstacles, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become avaluable lesson for the future. a toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows howto walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. in addition,only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. we will never appreciateanything that comes so easy. difficulties can make us feel
i support the idea that a factory to be built near our community. i list my reasons as follows. firstly, a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our community. the factory will employ a lot of workers. as a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. many people in our community will find a job in the factory. as peoples income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.
secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. the tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenue for our town. as people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. the town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. this will boost real estate development in our community.
some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. this is not the truth. modern technologies have made todays factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. there are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. we should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.
of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. but in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. i strongly support to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.
托福写作满分评分标准篇六
some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. other universities requirestudents to specialize in one subject. which is better? use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.
托福写作满分作文范文：
the use of computer is increasingly popular in modern society. some people think that thecomputer makes life more convenient and easier because they can compile documents, buy goodsthrough the internet and do other works on the computer. nevertheless, in my opinion, thecomputer makes life more complex and stressful. there are many instances supporting myopinion.
before the computer was invented, people only need to learn the knowledge of mathematics,physics, chemistry and so on. however, today people have to learn how to operate the computer,to use a variety of software and if the computer does not work, people have to learn how to repairit. people have to learn not only the knowledge of software but also that of hardware. no endinglearning makes people exhausted and their life more complex.
the computer also makes life more stressful. the society in which we live is called ^v^information society& quot ;. thanks for the development of the computer, the rhythm of life are increasinglyrapid. the business men has so many meetings to attend, so many e-mails to deal with that theyhave no time to have his lunch. some students have to work late on the computer to do the homework at night. there are more and more people struggling from the nervous sickness andcomplaining the ^v^busy life^v^.
the rapid development of the computer makes people feel stressful, too. the new generation of the software and the hardware, the update of them, all of these make people have to pay more andmore time and money on their computers.
although the computer has become an indispensable part of our life, it can be concluded from theabove statements that the computer makes life more complex and stressful.
托福写作满分评分标准篇七
it has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your you support or oppose this plan? why? use specific reasons and details to support youranswer.
托福作文满分范文：
there are both advantages and disadvantages of establishing a shopping mall in our neighborhood.
i am worried about traffic and how it will affect our community. however, i believe it will benefitlocal business and increase appreciations for local area. all in all, i think it is a good idea.
for those what i am worried about, traffic congestion and parking problem are obverse. first ofall, traffic congestion is always a concern when building something new. our streets are narrow,with parking on both sides. a shopping center will certainly bring more traffic than ever before,and heavy traffic means big congestion. at the same time, parking is also a problem in this area.
there are few garages attached to houses. most of residents depend on finding spaces on thestreet for parking. if a shopping mall is build, we must compete with customers and patrons forthose parking spaces. furthermore, if the shopping center offers valet parking service, it would beeven worse because valet parking works in terms to grab every possible spaces available in street.
on the other hand, building up a shopping center will give this neighborhood more opportunitiesand benefits. residents in this area could certainly take the job that shopping center offers. peoplewould earn more money and spend on other business, such as entertainment and education, whichare operating in our neighborhood or adjacent communities. as a result, not only local businessbut also inter-community business boosts up and a prodigious amount of fortune will beaccumulated to our neighborhood. a shopping center can also attract people to visit ourcommunity. when they drive to the shopping center, they will see what a nice place this area is tolive. therefore, we would have an increasing number of residents in the next couple of years. it isvery important to introduce new numbers because we have lost many residents to suburbs duringrecent years.
in a short, there are several details to consider when planning a shopping center. in my part, isupport to have a new shopping center in my community because its advantages .
托福写作满分评分标准篇八
do you agree or disagree with the following statement? classmates are a more important influence than parents on a childs success in school. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
作文范文：
although students stay with their classmates all time in school, parents are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success. i disagree with the statement that classmates are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success in school, because of the reasons as follows.
first of all, parents are the people who understand their own children best. they know thechildren’s good sides and bad habits. they can correct the children’s bad idea and make them giverid of the bad habits. so children can found a good base to get success in school. but classmatescan not do these work.
the other reason is that parents have experiences on a lot of matters. if children have problems,parents can give them their experiences to help them solve problems. if parents have no similarexperiences, they still can give their children some advice and make them avoid the wrong
directions. classmates can also give children some help, but they do not have more experiencesthan parents. so their influence is less than that of parents.
parents also have other important influence on their children’s success in school. parents mayanalyze something in different ways and have different opinions from children. classmates alsocan have different opinions on one thing, but they are at the same conditions with each other,their opinions may be similar or narrow. children can learn more comprehensive knowledge abouton thing from their parents.
so, based on the above discussion, i think it is clear that parents are a more important influencethan classmates on a child’s success in school.
