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I Want to Be A Volunteer of Protecting Animals

A very good morning / afternoon to you all ,everyone.My name is XXX,a student from XXX Middle School.As we know,animals are our good friends.Hower,as we can see,some animals,especially rare animals,are becoming fewer and fewer.

In order to protect these animals,I want to be a volunteer。I am active and out-going.I like animals,such as cats,dogs,rabits as well as everything related to animals,like newspapers,magazines and videos.I often take part in the activities of protecing animals.For example, last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting.Many people came and supported me.

To be a good volunteer,I need to do more,I will read some books about animals.Meanwhile,I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals.

I believe I can do the work well,I hope you can give me the chance.

That's all.Thank you.

解析

这是一篇命题作文，写一封推荐信推荐自己。写作中注意将自己的情况介绍清楚并表达自己参加比赛的意愿。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在及将来时态，第一人称。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

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小作文：

多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。