在日常的学习、工作、生活中,肯定对各类范文都很熟悉吧。那么我们该如何写一篇较为完美的范文呢?以下是小编为大家收集的优秀范文,欢迎大家分享阅读。
向组织寻求帮助篇一
dear fang,
i am sorry that i have to ask a favour of you, with the hope that you will be kind to help me.
i have been longing to apply for the entrance examination for ma candidates for a long time because i want to pursue advanced i find myself far from the required standard, especially my very poor english. at this moment, the personal friendship leads me to approach you with the request, whether you can manage to give me some constructive guidance. i promise to be a diligent student. if you agree, i will come to your house once a week at a time most convenient to you.
thank you very much for your kind help on many occasions in the past.
your friend,
×××
向组织寻求帮助篇二
dear sir/madam, 段落一
(1) 我是伯明翰大学业余爱好协会的主要成员。(2) 这封信的目的是诚挚地邀您前来(活动信息)。段落二
(3) 为了方便你制定计划,我会告诉你此次活动的安排。(4) 首先,活动将在周四晚上7点在教师楼举行。(5) 此外,本次活动将由一位著名嘉宾主持。(6) 最后,在活动结束后,我们为全体来宾准备了一场精彩的演出。
段落三
(7) 您能花时间阅读这封信,我感激不尽。(8) 如果有时间出席,我会非常高兴。
yours sincerely, li ming
小作文4: 询问信、求助信
dear sir/madam,段落一
(1) i am the president of student union in western university.(2) this letter is a proper chance to get a few answers from you about (主题词).
段落二
(3) in the first place, (信息1), which weighs heavily on my mind and i attach great importance to it.(4) moreover, (信息2), which will for sure cast significant impact on my follow-up actions.(5) if you can send me pamphlets, i will gain a deeper understanding by reading them.
段落三
(6) i appreciate that you could take the time to read this letter.(7) i truly expect to hear from you as soon as possible.
yours sincerely, li ming
向组织寻求帮助篇三
求助信和咨询信有些类似,都是写信给对方,求对方帮自己一些忙。
求助信更多的是需要一些实质性的帮助,比如——请求对方帮助自己提高口语、帮助自己修改简历、帮自己调节情绪、给自己处理人际关系等等。
语气:在求助信和咨询信一类的写作里,其中很重要的一点就是要注意礼貌,也就是在措辞时多用客气一点的表达。
内容:
1、。不管是在信中求助还是在现实生活中求助,不要让对方感觉自己是个白嫖党。我们肯定是遇到了一些困难,求助对方解决,而在此基础之上,我们还要给一点内容阐述自己已经在此问题上作出了什么努力。
2、,自己需要对方的帮助。而是要具体阐述自己的问题,具体需要对方哪一方面的帮助,在作文中具体写出。
dear xxx
开头段:
同样是流程式的作文,开头段遵循 “困难背景”+“写信目的” 。二者可以没有先后顺序,不过最好是按照先说所遇困难的背景,再说写信目的,二者之间呈现因果关系。当然也可以用一些词汇来调整语序,比如since。
。主要是用来简单介绍自己是怎么遇到当前的困难的,也就是造成当前求助的原因。
。根据所遇困难然后顺势引出自己的写信目的——需要您的帮助。
比如,我即将去国外做交换生,口语是很重要的能力之一 [困难背景],所以我写信来向你寻求一些帮助[写信目的]。再比如,期末考试即将临近,我还是无法投入到学习中去[困难背景],所以写信来请求提供一些指导建议[写信目的]。
①as final exam is approaching, i find it still challenging to devote myself to my study. thus, i am writing to you for some instructive guidance.
随着期末考试的临近,我发现自己仍然很难投入学习。因此,我写信给你,希望得到一些有益的指导。
:thus 是副词,另起主句的话前面需要用句号隔开。
②burdened with quantities of academic and personal affairs, i‘m feeling exhausted everyday and always get sleepy in class. therefore, with full expectation, i want to ask you for some way out.
由于学业和个人事务的繁重,我每天都感到精疲力尽,上课时总是昏昏欲睡。因此,带着满满的期待,我想向你询问一些建议。
③these days i have been struggling with my english learning. therefore, your help is badly needed.
这些天我一直在努力学习英语。因此,我非常需要你的帮助。
④faced with the challenge of learning english well, i‘m writing for your generous help and assistance.
面对学好英语的困难,我写信来希望得到你的慷慨帮助。
⑤how is everything going?i was admitted to harvard university for mti, and fluent spoken english is badly needed. so i am writing to seek some advice on how to improve it.
你最近一切都好吗?我要去哈佛大学念mti了,急需一口流利的口语能力。所以我写信是想寻求一些关于如何提高口语的建议。
⑥i’m writing this letter, hoping that you could do me a favor with improving my pronunciation.
我在写这封信,希望你能帮我改善发音。
中间段:
开头段已然简述了自己所遇困难的背景。中间段要做的就是就自己的困难具体铺开,具体阐述自己遇到的困难,并且说明自己在此方面已经做了哪些努力。
⑦in pursuing the improvement of my vocabulary, i have spent countless spare time on it. nonetheless, it remains impossible for me to reach 60 percent accuracy, which troubles me a lot.
为了提高我的词汇量,我花了不少的闲余时间去背记他们。可尽管如此,我仍然不能达到60%的准确率,这让我头疼得很。
⑧steady progress was made in my pronunciation, but i find that communicating with native speakers in english remains a big headache to me.
我的发音持续进步,但我发现用英语与以英语为母语的人交流仍然是我的一大难题。
⑨though reading a good many of books and being taught by teachers with high quality, it remains hard for me to put what i learned into effect and make huge change.
虽然我已经读过不少书,而且也听过很多名师的教诲,但是我仍然很难把我学到的东西付诸实践,做出巨大的改变。
⑩furthermore/plus, what troubles me most is that the more i learn, the less scores i get.
此外,最让我烦恼的是,我学的越多,得到的分数反而更少
⑪i often fail to manage the proper use of english words, putting me in an embarrassing situation.
我经常不能正确使用英语单词,使我陷入尴尬的境地。
结尾段:
结尾再次希望对方能够拨冗相助,并且表达自己最诚挚的感谢。
⑫hopefully, you could spare some time to offer me some guidance on it, which surely could benefit me a lot.
希望你能抽出一些时间给我一些指导,那一定会对我大有裨益。
⑬should you be kind to reply to me promptly i would be highly appreciated.
如果你能及时答复我,我将非常感谢。
⑭i would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. thank you in advance.
如果您能在方便的时候尽早给我答复,我将不胜感激。提前感谢啦。
高频词汇:
writing for you assistance 写信寻求您的帮助
your help is badly needed 急需您的帮助
i‘m writing to ask for you help with/in ... 我写信来寻求你在...方面的帮助
do me a favor with 在某方面为我提供帮助
offer me some help 给我提供一些帮助
generous help and assistance 慷慨帮助
headache 头疼
challenge 困难;挑战
challenging 困难的;具有挑战的
have difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth. 做...有困难
sth. remains a big headache to me ... 对我仍是一个xxx烦
can‘t put what i learned into effect/practice
struggle with 奋斗;与...斗争
perform poorly 表现不佳
bottle-neck 瓶颈
makes it impossible for.. 我几乎不可能...
burdened with... 承担...
your prompt reply will be highly appreciated 如能及时答复,我们将不胜感激
your timely attention to my inquiry will be highly appreciated 如能及时关注我的询问,我们将不胜感激
a response at your earliest convenience will be highly appreciated. 如能能尽早答复,我们将不胜感激。
looking for your early reply. 期待您的尽早回复。(最次选择)
should you be kind to reply to me promptly i would be highly appreciated.
如果你能及时答复我,我将非常感谢。
向组织寻求帮助篇四
假如你是李华,最近,你和好朋友lisa的关系不好,让你比较迷茫。于是你写信向知音栏目主持人tom求助。请你用100字左右的英文写这封求助信。内容要点如下:
1 .影响你们友谊的具体事件或者原因。
2.你的感受。
3.求助的具体内容。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
dear tom,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours
li hua
范文
dear tom,
you are a celebrity in aiding those who are in trouble because of personal life and work. im writing to ask you of afavor and hope you will be kind enough to give me some instructions.
recently,lisa,my best friend from mychildhood,didnt treat me the way before. what made our relationship less close was an accidental argument on how to get on well with parents. we hold quite different opinions on that. since then we have seldom spoken to each other,which really makes me sad and depressed. i am at such a loss over what i can do to make up and in need of your help. i will be extremely grateful if you could give me some advice.
looking forward to your early reply. bestwishes for you.
yours
li hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于求助信,要求考生给知音栏目主持人tom写信,就如何处理好与好朋友lisa的关系向他寻求帮助。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
帮助:aid →help
最近、近期:recently→lately
争论、争吵:argument→quarrel
观点:opinion →view/idea
2.句式拓展
原句:recently, lisa, my bestfriend from my childhood, didnt treat me the way before.
拓展句:recently, lisa, who hasbeen my best friend from my childhood, didnt treat me the way before.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] you are a celebrityin aiding those who are in trouble because of personal life and work. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] what made ourrelationship less close was an accidental argument on how to get on well withparents. (运用了what引导的主语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] i am at such a loss over what i can do tomake up and in need of your help. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
向组织寻求帮助篇五
尊敬的市长:
您好!
本人是卢湾区,打浦街道,徐一居委的一名残疾病人。由于是是低保家庭,生活上举步为艰。不得以,来信求助你们有关部门。虽然我在这次生病期间,同样得到居委的帮助与关心,但是我非常的感谢徐一居委里的所有工作人员。
我是一个多病的人,由于在20xx年,没有经济来源,看病的医药费又非常昂贵,导致我的右眼因并发症而失明。经上海市劳动局的检查,得出的结果是——完全丧失劳动能力,后又经卢湾区残疾检查,结果是一样的——二级残废。
没有办法,人要活,只能劳动,我在外打工过日子,丈夫也是没有工作,生活来源也没有。由于我病情的加重,20xx年3月25日,被抢救到九人民医院,经三天的化验,检查,3月28日,我的右脚被截肢,生活一下子一落千丈。这一下给一个已经很贫困的家庭带来了更大的打击,作为行动不能自行的人,生活不能自理的人,而且家庭为我背上了几万元的债务。我现在还能拿什么偿还别人的债务。以后我的生活是否有保障,也不知道。由于身体有多种疾病,每天要服用大量的药物,低保的两百多元,吃药都不够,还谈什么生活,丈夫身体也有病,他为了家,为了我,不得不出去打工,我现在又成了残疾人,xxx不可能看着我们见死不救吧?我相信,有困难,找组织是没有错的。
今天我写给市长这封信,也同时发给了其他各个部门,有关我生活的问题,相信在这世界上好人还是有的。一个人要生存,是要依靠稳定的经济来支撑的,没有经济来源,还谈什么生存,我也不希望这样。但是受生活所迫,不得已才这样。
以前我可以做保姆工作来维持生活,现在不行了,职能靠党的救助了,我的希望我的未来只有靠党,党是我的衣食父母。作为一个残疾人,这是我内心的呼唤。
作为市长您,万元的债务不算什么,你的钞票和房子有的是,但对于我们底层老百姓而言,是天文数字。我们家欢迎您来我家住几天,感受一下我们居住的环境。我儿子26岁,连睡觉的床铺都放不下,想必你的女儿睡觉的地方比我家的面积还大,求得你市长帮助解决,我们等着你最好的回音。
感谢党的帮助,也同样感谢所有帮助过我们家庭的好人。
向组织寻求帮助篇六
假定你是李华,当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.本人简介。2.求助内容。3.希望得到tom的帮助。
dear teacher,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours sincerely,
li hua
向组织寻求帮助篇七
directions: suppose you are a senior majored in physics and plan to study further abroad. please write a letter of about 100 words to professor li and ask him to write a reference for you to a u. s. do not need to write the address.
dear professor li,
i am a undergraduate from the department of physics and i fortunately took a major course on which you lectured. your lessons impressed me deeply.
as a senior, i face the choice between hunting for a job and continuing to study. i prefer to apply for a chance to pursue a master’s degree abroad.
i have taken required english exams and got excellent scores. what’s more, i have finished my personal statement, which is attached to this letter. i’m now writing to ask if you can write a reference for me, which will greatly facilitate my admission into a . university.
best wishes for your health.
your student,
×××
向组织寻求帮助篇八
假定你是校学生会主席李华。最近我国许多城市发生新型肺炎疾病,医疗防护用品短缺。你代表校学生会向美国好
友peter求助,帮助购买一批口罩、消毒用品,供学校师生使用,具体内容如下:
1.写信目的
2.请求原因及内容
3.支付方式
4.表示感谢
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:肺炎pneumonia 口罩facemask 消毒剂disinfectant
dear peter,
yours
lihua
dear peter,
how are things going?i hope everything is fine with china‘s facing a medical emergency and i‘m writing on behalf of our school‘s student union to make a request for immediate help/urgent aid.(purpose of writing)
as you know, recently there has been a severe outbreak of the plague of pneumonia(肺炎传染病) in wuhan city, china,caused by a novel coronavirus(新型冠状病毒) ,resulting in many hundreds of deaths deadly disease has spread through the country so quickly that basic medical supplies are in great ,some protective articles(物品) such as face masks and disinfectants are running short/lowandcurrently you be so kind as to purchase from your country as many breathing masks and disinfectants as you can,andsend them to our school by express(快递) as quickly as possible? i‘d appreciate it if you could take my request into the goods are made available, i will pay you in advance by wechat or alipay.(what reason, help and payment)
your timely assistance will be of great importance to can‘t thank you enough for your kindness,which we would always forward to your early reply.(expressing thanks and expectations)
i/we...?
we/i...?
you like to...?
you mind doing...?
you be so kind as to give me some more information about...?
be kindenough to give...?
‘d be grateful if you could let me knowi n advance.
‘d appreciate it if you could provide some more detals about...
wonder if you could give me some advice.
permit me to thank you for you rkind offer of help.
(do)hope that...
it possible that you could come a little earlier?
would be nice/wonderful if you could let us know in advance
向组织寻求帮助篇九
自荐信:
now, i am writing to apply for the job/position.
感谢信:
now, i am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you.
邀请信:
now, i am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor).
建议信:
now, i am writing to give you a hand.
求助信:
now, i am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.
道歉信:
now, i am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.
告知信:
now, i am writing to tell you about the details.
向组织寻求帮助篇十
应该遵照英文书信的格式,表达出自己希望得到的急切心理和诚意。
1、常用句型
英文求助信的一些规律性语言(见模板)。自我介绍、写信目的、说明困难、提出要求、进一步展望。此外,描绘身处困境的无奈心情可用 i don’t know what to do. / i wonder how to deal with the problem. 描绘渴望得到对方帮助可用i’m eager to get your help. / i’m eager for your timely help等。
2、过渡性词语
列举自己所遇困难、请求对方帮助(见模板)。此外,需要表达困难所导致的不良后果时可用as a result, as a result of, as a consequence, as a consequences of等过渡性词语。
3、高级表达
可用分词作状语,也可用so that或in order that引导目的状语
向组织寻求帮助篇十一
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给tom写一封电子邮件:
1.询问tom的生活和学习情况;
2.谈谈你的困难并请tom帮忙;
3.告诉tom你打算赛后去看他。
注意:
1.词数:不少于80词;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【优秀满分范文】
dear tom,
how is it going these days? i keep wondering how you feel about your school life in beijing. have you got used to the life in china? are you enjoying your life? i hope you are.
let me tell you a piece of good news: i’m going to take part in an english speech contest of middle school students in july in the coming summer vacation. so i’m busy preparing for it. but now i have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper english words to express my thoughts. besides, i really want to improve my spoken english, especially the pronunciation and intonation. of course, as a native english speaker, you can give me some suggestions. in addition, i’m going to visit you after the contest.
i’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in beijing! i can hardly wait to see you! i am looking forward to your early reply.
yours,
li hua
假设你叫李华,欲与来自本校不同班级的另外4名同学组建一支乐队,但缺乏经验,请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯(cousins)先生发一封电子邮件,以寻求帮助。
1. 成员中有三名男生和两名女生,均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈; 2. 每周周末排练是否足够?初期演唱的音乐宜多元化还是一种风格?
3. 怎样获得较多的表演机会?
4. 希望他能为乐队取个名字。
注意:1. 词数:100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3. e-mail的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。
dear mr. cousins,
since you are a well-known musician, i’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band.
i as well as two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. we are all fond of pop music and modern dance. i’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. and is it enough to practise only at weekends? how can we get more chances to perform?
we’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.
looking forward to your reply.
best wishes!
yours sincerely,
li hua
向组织寻求帮助篇十二
1.咨询信:i’m writing to enquire/ask about…
2.邀请信:i’m writing to invite you to attend our english salon.
3.申请信:i’m writing to apply for the position. (正文的词:be qualified for, be equipped with)
4.求助信:i’m writing to ask a favor of you.
5.感谢信:i’m writing to extend my gratitude for ....
6.慰问信:i’m extremely sorry to hear that .... are you feeling better now?
7.欢迎词:please allow me, on behalf of my school, to express our warmest welcome to...
i feel honored/it a great privilege/honor to express our warmest welcome to …, on behalf of my school.
8.建议信:i’m writing to offer my suggestions on /about….(正文:it is suggested that…; why not…; if i were you, i would do…)
9.请假信:i’m writing to ask for a leave from your literature class next thursday.
10.祝贺信:i’m writing to express my heartfelt congratulations on your winning ....
11.道歉信: i’m writing to make an apology(to sb) for (doing) sth
12.投诉信: i’m writing to complain (to sb) about sth / make a complaint (to sb) about sth
(body部分:be dissatisfied with...对...不满意express dissatisfaction with/about ...to ones disappointment)
13.通知
1). ...will be held /...is to be held / ...will take place 将举行...
2). sth/sb be scheduled to do sth ...计划(定于)做...
3). you are required/expected to do sth 要求你...
4). everyone is welcome to do... / those who… are welcome to join in the activity.