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Hi, Susan,

We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.  We’d like to invitee you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party, too.

解析

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扩展知识

范文中运用一些常见短语would like to 想要做某事；keep quiet保持安静；have a good time玩得愉快。When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him.这个句子运用when引导的状语从句；It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be.这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式，how引导是see的宾语从句。